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The Manager by ~MrsMomijiSohma:iconMrsMomijiSohma:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


let's break it
D
  O
     W
        N
though by thought
            move by move
                     touch by touch
                     
                     something so wrong
                     never looked so
                     vogue
             dirty mouths
             ex
                 change
             dirty words
greedy hands
grab
needing skin
                                         How did
                                               it
                                             cum
                                          to this?
one                                                                                                        Maybe we
time                                                                                                         could try
sin                                                                                                            it again
                                          ........................
©2008-2009 ~MrsMomijiSohma
:iconmrsmomijisohma:

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something I tried fiddling wiht, haven't written in awhile

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:iconaethra-caelis:
~aethra-caelis Nov 14, 2008, 11:03:22 AM
:excited:

:glomp:

I MISSED YOU, GIRL!! :XD:

And this piece is fantastic. Sent shivers down my spine. :love:

--
"The heart has its reasons, in which Reason knows nothing." -- Blaise Pascal
:iconmrsmomijisohma:
~MrsMomijiSohma Nov 14, 2008, 11:43:06 AM
thank you so much! I know I've been gone for awhile , but hey I was busy getting engaged to my manager, lol moved out of my parents finished high school.

I have this other piece I want to post but I have no idea how I'll do it, it's very visual and is going to be a pain in the ass to type up! lol

I'm trying to keep up with DA more, and I've still been watching everyhting you've been posting (Which is amazing by the way!) so hopefully I'll have more time to comment and post.

missed you too!

--
I give the fight up:
Let there be an end;
A privacy
An obscene nook for me,
I want to be forgottten
Even by god.
:iconaethra-caelis:
~aethra-caelis Nov 14, 2008, 11:59:15 AM
:wow: It's been a while indeed! So many changes & challenges, and things to get us writing poetry once more...

:hug: Really good to have you back.

--
"The heart has its reasons, in which Reason knows nothing." -- Blaise Pascal
:iconteava:
~Teava Nov 20, 2008, 4:48:09 PM
Yaay, I've missed your stuff. :3 I miss you in general.

<3
:icondonaldsfan:
~donaldsfan Nov 28, 2008, 2:04:32 PM
is it just me or is this....

--
"I cannot say what loves have come and gone; I only know that summer sang in me
A little while, that in me sings no more."
-Edna St. Vincent Millay
from "What Lips My Lips Have Kissed"
:iconmrsmomijisohma:
~MrsMomijiSohma Nov 29, 2008, 6:45:39 PM
is this....horrible. yes I know but I had to post something after so long

--
I give the fight up:
Let there be an end;
A privacy
An obscene nook for me,
I want to be forgottten
Even by god.
:icondonaldsfan:
~donaldsfan Nov 30, 2008, 1:59:22 PM
not what i meant but we can go with it.

--
"I cannot say what loves have come and gone; I only know that summer sang in me
A little while, that in me sings no more."
-Edna St. Vincent Millay
from "What Lips My Lips Have Kissed"
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